tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384936849977708343.post3598470590311730007..comments2009-06-03T11:00:52.042-04:00Babakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00653662239243380548noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384936849977708343.post-25622507904010078762009-06-03T11:00:52.042-04:002009-06-03T11:00:52.042-04:00nakone chizi shode? nesbat be in weblog kheili talkh bood in post!!<br />lahnesh mesle ranjide khateri bood ke say mikone taskin bede khodesho ba mosbat negari!!avinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07450270208230953709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384936849977708343.post-18546400459346743132009-05-19T21:44:11.497-04:002009-05-19T21:44:11.497-04:00the conceptual contrast between verses 1-2, and 3-4 is interesting.jeerjeerakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17991967079566685157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3384936849977708343.post-6238452924929240302009-05-19T06:07:00.000-04:002009-05-19T06:07:00.000-04:00نمیدونم شعر از خودتونه یا کس دیگه:)<br />تو مصراع دوم نمیشه در "رهگذر" گفت که آوای شعر همگون تر بشه؟<br />شاد و پیروز باشیدآزادهhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05762319246716337914noreply@blogger.com